ok heres the toned version. I named them Murato(boy) and Charita(girl).

A story is that, they're bestfriends and the girl is a mysterious perverted looking innocent but you'll discover her true self if you invite her for a drink. The boy is just a funny type and God fearing. How come they became friends? well, based in my experience..

Looks can be deceiving, actually she's cute and short. She was the one who approached me. I later found out that she's not innocent but she looks like innocent in outside of her. When she is drunk she became deadly in bed but we never did that because i am not that kind of boy at that time. So i stay away from and not to be concsious about her action everytime i saw her at school. To make the long story short, we've been bestfriends but separated after a few months. One of my unforgetable experience in my life.something i can get a lesson from it. Now she have a baby and i don't know that guy. As far as i know lots and many guys already took her home or went somewhere in the dark place..hahaha..

i hope the toned version works out well.

comments and suggestion are always welcome..